I like the concept of this Dave, and I think it would work well in B&W but the cars are just getting too lost. It's so dark, the title almost doesn't fit because not knowing what's there, I can really only make out 2 cars in this. I like the idea of having the ground layer darker, it makes for a nice mood, just brighten it up a bit more to help the cars be a little more recognizable. Not a lot brighter, but maybe a stop more.