Douglas Sherman
Staff
This image is of Tatahatso Point in the Marble Canyon section of the Grand Canyon during a Monsoon storm in 2018.
Is this better, Alan?A pretty wide range of light but I love the monsoon storm over the canyon.
Thanks for your kind comments, Jameel. I made some changes above based on Alan's sugestion.I like the monsoon clouds and the lightening in this image. Nicely done Doug.
Definitely - the sunlight in the upper left has been tamed nicely in this version.Is this better, Alan?
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How does this look to you, Kyle?Great scene and atmospherics. Nice catch with the lightning. I much prefer the reworked version. You might want to try burning down the rocks in the bottom and right (maybe even just similar to the first version).
Thanks, Alan. I will eventually get this right.I like this new version even better as it brings my eyes up into the canyon now.