By the Window

Ben Egbert

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Not my venue, but I really like how you did this. The light is prefect, the arrangement has just enough imperfections to look natural and you have the table and window perfectly squared. I love the fragrance of carnations, I bet they really made for a pleasant environment.
 

Zeph

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I like the vignette or the lighting along the left side, though I might tighten the crop there. I think the comp is balanced and I feel the window is the best element of the shot. The cheese and apples are the theme, which is classic, not sure how the camera prop fits in to the theme and the gaudy grapes detract or cheapen the otherwise interesting comp.
I agree w/others that the image is technically very well balanced and your lighting control is nicely executed, but the image message doesn't resonate with me.
 
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