Carlsbad. CA.
Mike Lewis
Staff Member
Wow, a very nicely composed and dramatically captured scene! Love that light through the clouds, with the colder look to the foreground, and the colors are really making this work well too.
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AlanLichty
Moderator
I like the light both on the blooms as well as the sun rays in the distance.
Wlademir, you definitely got a mood working in this. Very moody indeed.
A couple of thoughts for you.
1st, I think I might brighten the water some. The blacks and dark of the sky looks moody, but in the water it ends up looking more muddy and it pulls a bit of life out of the image.
2nd, I don't think it can be cropped out now, but when composing I would keep an out of sandy bare area's in the ground layer. Myself, I would have composed this one to not have included that sandy area in the lower right. I would have moved a bit so that I could have gotten flowers in that whole lower corner.
A couple of thoughts for you.
1st, I think I might brighten the water some. The blacks and dark of the sky looks moody, but in the water it ends up looking more muddy and it pulls a bit of life out of the image.
2nd, I don't think it can be cropped out now, but when composing I would keep an out of sandy bare area's in the ground layer. Myself, I would have composed this one to not have included that sandy area in the lower right. I would have moved a bit so that I could have gotten flowers in that whole lower corner.
Johnny Mendoza
Well-Known Member
Rather the dramatic image you have presented here. I concur with cropping some off of the right side to improve this.
Very dramatic.
Leslie Hunter
Well-Known Member
I agree very dramatic.
Best regards,