Michael Liskay
Well-Known Member
Thanks to Ben Egbert's expert advice I cut and pasted in PS this image.
Eclipse Montage
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AlanLichty
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Fun sequence - that would make a nice science classroom poster.
Hey Mike,
That looks pretty good. It's nice seeing all the phases. The lower left one which looks like it's silhouetting some flowers on a hill side, may not come across real well on the web, being small I had to look for a second to figure it out. But when printed larger, that will be really cool and much more readily discerned. I think that's a great touch to this.
As a thought....
I wonder if that lower left corner where I am assuming is a hillside, what if in that corner, you just ever so softly went and lightened it. I am thinking so soft and subtle with just a hint of detail or outlining, but just enough to let it anchor that corner? Just an idea, not sure if it would even look good. But a thought for you.
Jim
That looks pretty good. It's nice seeing all the phases. The lower left one which looks like it's silhouetting some flowers on a hill side, may not come across real well on the web, being small I had to look for a second to figure it out. But when printed larger, that will be really cool and much more readily discerned. I think that's a great touch to this.
As a thought....
I wonder if that lower left corner where I am assuming is a hillside, what if in that corner, you just ever so softly went and lightened it. I am thinking so soft and subtle with just a hint of detail or outlining, but just enough to let it anchor that corner? Just an idea, not sure if it would even look good. But a thought for you.
Jim
Good job but one suggestion, they are not in a truly straight line. If you lay a straightedge along the bottom of the suns you can see this especially the full eclipse versions. It's subtle, but visible. If you want to place them on a curve, it should also be very uniform.
You handled the coronas just fine.
You handled the coronas just fine.
Kyle Jones
Moderator
Very nice sequence. Good catch by Ben on the alignment. I think the foliage in the lower left is a really nice touch.