Very nice Lenny. That was nice of the guy to let you take a few shots.
I guess I am just too old school or too conservative but I find the tatoo's pretty distracting.
You did a good job in #1 with limiting the DOF. Now in #2 that tatoo just looks weird below her bikini top. But again, maybe that's just me. I don't like her hand between her legs like that and then cut off. So compositionally I would have liked to see the cut off hand up on her knee. The model has a nice look and actually if you crop the photo from the bottom of the bikini top up, so that it focuses more on her face I think that one is really nice.
Dude named his dirt trike Alisha? Weird but whatevs... I think the tattoos are ok, the problem is the tied on sweater, the tires, the sand, the rocks, etc.. everything in the picture is competing for my attention.. I like the second shot a LOT more.
There is an issue with Uploading Photos (attachjments). I am not sure what the problem is, and I am looking into it. You can still try to Create your Threads and Upload your Photos, but it is hanging up during the Upload.