The Wave in B&W

AlanLichty

Moderator
Wow - B&W worked really well in this case. This is one of the more interesting variants I have seen for wave shots.
 

JimFox

Moderator
Staff member
Hey Jeffrey,

That is super cool! I really need to put in again for a Wave permit, that's an awesome place.

I like the look of this B&W, it really works well with the contrast of the lines. I think I might crop off or maybe nudge out that corner in the upper left. The background showing through there is sufficiently dark that it's not that distracting, but I think it would be cool to have that upper right corner be clean with the curving lines ending up all the way at the corner.

Jim
 

Jeffrey

Well-Known Member
Thanks, guys.

Jim, if you do, put my name in for one for the same day. I could go back again.
 

Ryan10

Founding Member
That looks awesome. Love the folds on the left disrupting the flow of the image.



My one improvement suggestion per post.
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Just me, but I'd try and remove that extreme top left corner, or include more of it. You've got nice sweeping lines and some folds, and then that top left corner of background wave texture.
 

Jeffrey

Well-Known Member
Thanks for your comments and valuable observations. Yeah, I could fix up that left corner, the more I look at it.
 
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