Hey Jeffrey,
That is super cool! I really need to put in again for a Wave permit, that's an awesome place.
I like the look of this B&W, it really works well with the contrast of the lines. I think I might crop off or maybe nudge out that corner in the upper left. The background showing through there is sufficiently dark that it's not that distracting, but I think it would be cool to have that upper right corner be clean with the curving lines ending up all the way at the corner.
Jim