Maple Spray +Edit #2

AlanLichty

Moderator
While I was out shooting fall leaves today I came across an example of fall leaves that was a bit out of the ordinary. In the Pacific NW we have a tree called the Big Leaf Maple. The leaves are huge - up to 8 plus inches across so the plant earned its name. In this case several of the leaves had piled up against a rock in the midst of some rapids and created a very unique water spray effect. I incorporated this into several different scenes while I worked the area but finally decided to make it a shot of it's own.

Maple Spray:


C&C always welcome.

Edit: New edits and in particular cropping to remove a distracting edge of a rock.


Edit2: A framing rework as a result of Jim Dockery's comment.

 
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Mike Lewis

Staff Member
Well now, that is just a very unique and engaging image! Not sure of the shutter speed used, but it seems to be perfect to capture the right mixture of water motion and water detail to make it look like I would imagine it looked in person. Well seen and captured!

ML
 

JimFox

Moderator
Staff member
Very cool indeed Alan! I like the spraying of the water. How about a slight crop to lose that rock that is along the upper left edge? Even using the warp tool to gently nudge it out of the frame would work as you don't have much space on the top or bottom for cropping.
 

AlanLichty

Moderator
Thanks for the feedback and comments.

I just got back home so I will try to see about cloning out that fragment of rock on my bigger screen.
 

Bob

Well-Known Member
Alan,
This is a very cool effect. I like it a lot. I agree with Jim lose the rock on the upper left.
Bob
 

AlanLichty

Moderator
The rock in the upper left has been removed. I decided I wanted to leave the water flow patterns alone so a quick snip took care of the offending stone. I also tweaked the WB a bit along with just a touch more color to the leaves.
 

Jim Dockery

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Good eye on that unusual spray. I see a much tighter zoom (if you’d had the lens) into the spray, loosing the bottom rocks that distract me from the main idea.
 

AlanLichty

Moderator
Good eye on that unusual spray. I see a much tighter zoom (if you’d had the lens) into the spray, loosing the bottom rocks that distract me from the main idea.
Ironically I did have the lens - a 100-400mm hanging on my belt. In this case your suggestion of a tighter crop was easily with the capture and I ended up with a slightly different result but one that I really like where I pared the scene down to the spray and one last rock in the lower right. I couldn't quite get in all of the spray I wanted without some of that rock in the scene so I included all of it.
 

Ben Egbert

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That last edit takes on a whole new aspect where it appears that the leaves are some mighty vessel plowing against the water.
 
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