Mesquite Dawn

Alan Hoelzle

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Think an extra bit of temp overall would be worth trying. It would help the foreground sand, and also the right side of the dune. This would give a better idea of light direction, and balance the composition. If that works, you could then desaturate the small left dune.
 

JimFox

Moderator
Staff member
I am liking the edit Kyle. That subtle taking down the saturation in the mountains works for me. I like it as it stands.
 

Zeph

Well-Known Member
With all the BS on telling you how to change your image, let me add mine to the pile;)
The FG dune is the dominating element in the original, love the ripples, but nothing else can compete with it. Cropping off the lower 20% could provide some balance with the distant mountains and sky. Either way it's so good that it doesn't matter which way you slice or dice it.
 

Jeffrey

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Fine imaging Kyle. The re-post looks just like the original. Oh, just so slightly different. Remove more magenta from the hills. If that get too strong from using a contrast adjustment layer of some type, try changing the 'kind' to Luminence (at the bottom of the list). That allows the contrast changes but maintains original saturation.
 
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