Monolake morning

JimFox

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Pretty cool Jameel! You have some nice light and clouds in this. I kind of wish you had a few less clouds and more of the ground where that bit of land locked water can reflect more of the tufa's for some cool reflection foreground interest. But I do see why you included the clouds you did as they do balance the sky very well.
 

Jameel Hyder

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Pretty cool Jameel! You have some nice light and clouds in this. I kind of wish you had a few less clouds and more of the ground where that bit of land locked water can reflect more of the tufa's for some cool reflection foreground interest. But I do see why you included the clouds you did as they do balance the sky very well.
Actually I do have more ground along with the cloud which I cropped due to the slushy looking ground. I'll include that as well so see if that works better. Perhaps another approach here is to do some cloning.

 

Ben Egbert

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I prefer the first, too bad teh watre level was not higher to cover that mud and provide a nice full reflection.
 

AlanLichty

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I prefer the second one with the extra reflections. Nice conditions. The shore line isn't perfect but that's the reality of what was there.
 

Alisa

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Again from my recent trip. This one is a day earlier than my previous shot. The light was more subdued. The mountains in the west were cloud covered. This is looking NE.

Comments welcome.

Beautiful I like the snow in this! I agree with the slushee ground but I do like the reflection in the updated one.
 

Jameel Hyder

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Worked on a compromise between the two by doing some cloning. Personally I like this, would love to see what others think.

 

JimFox

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Well, while I was off running errands you have certainly come up with a really sweet shot Jameel! Love the added foreground, the reflections really make this scene come alive.

Great job on going back and making it work!
 

Kyle Jones

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I like the final, cleaned up version quite a bit. Having the extra reflections is nice. I'd potentially consider cropping some off of the right as well.
 

MonikaC

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I like the 3rd one as well. The reflections add to it & balance it nicely, particularly with the cleaned up water. I agree with Kyle on the right side crop: maybe so that the mud peninsula comes about 2/3 of the way across the frame?
 
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