Ophir Pass

Ben Egbert

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Nice Alisa, and I am glad you did not cut off the tree. Good flowers, good clouds and and overall pleasing image.
 

JimFox

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Hey Alisa,

This is pretty cool looking. It looks like your exploring found you some treasure!

I agree with Ben that you did a good job in not cutting off that tree. I would crop this though to remove that rock in the lower left corner. Being as it's the only rock in a field of flowers the eyes are going to get distracted by it. So crop this just a bit and I was say this is great!
 

Zeph

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I agree about the rock drawing interest, but cropping would take away to much of a good thing. How about intensifying the clouds to dominate the image with some drama.
 

AlanLichty

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I like the composition, colors, and clouds - looks like a nice place to stop for lunch.

Maybe if you just darkened the rock a little bit it wouldn't distract from the view above. It doesn't really bother me.
 

Jim Dockery

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Nice shot. I agree with Jim F and Alan, I'd first try to darken the rock, see how that works, then crop it and decide which I liked better. Zeph's idea of adding a little drama to the clouds would also be nice - it should be easy to select just the sky to work the levels/curves.
 

Alisa

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Thank you all for the comments I started to work on it more at my lunch hour but felt like I didn't have time. I will work on it soon and post the after results becuse this is one of my favorie Wildflower Pictures.
 
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