Rosy lips

AlanLichty

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Neat rose and I like the rainy look of the capture.

There are some of these in downtown Vancouver in Esther Short Park I shot while I was still working around there.
 

JimFox

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Very cool Jameel. I wonder if perhaps darkening the pedal in the lower left corner would help a bit? Right now since there pedal is brighter then the rest and in the corner I feel it pulling the eye down there.
 

Jameel Hyder

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Very pretty Jameel. Lovely rose you found.
Thanks Ben.

Neat rose and I like the rainy look of the capture.

There are some of these in downtown Vancouver in Esther Short Park I shot while I was still working around there.
Thanks Ben. Shouldn't be surprising given the proximity of Vancouver to Seattle area.

Very cool Jameel. I wonder if perhaps darkening the pedal in the lower left corner would help a bit? Right now since there pedal is brighter then the rest and in the corner I feel it pulling the eye down there.
Thanks Jim. Now that you point that out, it is impossible to not notice. Will work on that.
 

beavens

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Enjoyable colors and love the comp.

Would prefer a little more DOF, mainly on the OOF bits in the foreground.

Jeff
 

Amy Earl

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Really beautiful, Jameel.

I would like to see what a slightly modified crop would do. Something is bothering me about it. The petals on the left are nicely in focus, as well as the center, but since there is that OOF petal separating them which happens to be smack in the middle, it feels a little awkward. Where do you want the eye to go?

Also, the way the edge of that top-left petal exactly touches the edge of the frame...can you crop it so it's either in or out of the photo?

Very nice flower in any case :)
 

Jameel Hyder

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All good points Amy. As Jeff pointed out, more DoF is needed for sure. This was a hand held shot taken in a garden where tripods are frowned upon. I had to keep the shutter speed reasonable to avoid shake. Tried various crops and settled on this.
 
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